I want to write a realistic short story about collapse, but I want to make it hopeful.
Posted by HashnaFennec@reddit | collapse | View on Reddit | 11 comments
I know the sub is usually more about news and prepping, so my apologies if this type of post isn’t allowed.
I’m a long haul trucker and sometimes imagining stories helps the miles pass. With the price of fuel going up and the threat of shortages, I’ve been imagining a story about a group of travelers stranded at a rural truck stop. How would they deal with the initial shock of finding themselves stranded, then the power failing, then running out of food? What kind of society or commune would they create, how would they deal with newcomers, and how would they interact with neighboring communities? These are all things I’ve thought about, but I’d like input from other like minded people.
One of the things I’ve considered most is conflict. I’ve always disliked the zombie apocalypse trope that when the government disappears the world becomes a PVP zone. One of the early scripted episodes of Robert Even’s It Could Happen Here explored this idea and delved into the reality of hurricane Katrina. Most people banded together during a time of hardship and helped each other out. Ironically, most of the violence came from those who thought everyone else would turn to violence. They saw people who desperately needed supplies as “looters” and attacked them. Should my antagonist be a self imposed sheriff that enforces old laws that no longer apply? A group of good ol’ boys in a pickup truck with a “zombie hunter” decal looking for “looters”? Idk
I’d like the overall feeling of my story to be a hopeful one. A community that came together out of need, peacefully barter with their neighbors, and help who they can. Despite the antagonist, I want the reader to come way reassured that if our current society collapses, a better one will take its place.
What’s your thoughts?
No-Papaya-9289@reddit
It will be everyone for themselves. Unlike, say, The Stand, where 98% of people have died, everyone will be fighting for survival over dwindling resources. It will be a lot like Lord of the Flies meets Fallout.
cynicallythoughful@reddit
I’m imagining The Last of Us meets The Road
No-Papaya-9289@reddit
That too.
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BlackMassSmoker@reddit
You can write a story with any kind of theme, meaning, plot points etc. That is the beauty of writing - it can be whatever you want it to be. Break the rules! Fuck what the snobs think.
As someone who used to write but struggle to do so as I've got older, I'd recommend writing your story regardless. 'Art is it own reward' as they say. Check out the film 40 Acres for a bit of inspiration as well.
My 'collapse' story that I tinker with in my head is not wholly original. Basically think Salo/Thousand Days of Sodom. Society collapses, the story follows a specific bunker for the rich, where they have allowed x amount of men and x amount women in the bunker but they are only there for elites sick needs and desires - and the sexual exploitation and violence slowly ratchets up. A story to say whether in the world or in bunker with them, - we're just playthings for the rich.
But anyway, write your story and get the writing bug.
Fast-Armadillo1074@reddit
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guyseeking@reddit
ok
Pick one
clever712@reddit
Came here to make this exact comment lmfao
Erinaceous@reddit
Have you read Ursula LeGuin's Always Coming Home or Octavia Butler's The Parable of The Sower and the Parable of the Talents? There's also Rebecca Solnit's Hope in the Dark. Those are good places to start.
The main thing to think through is that collapse is a process not an event. A community that responds hopefully is one that chose another path and starting building another way by developing skills, community and a strong ethic of solidarity and mutual aid. They won't be the ones who find themselves stranded at a truck stop. They'll be the community nearby who comes to feed the stranded people. Who have tensions and infighting but have developed good processes to work things out. Who are responsible in deeply human, imperfect and contingent ways.
What's most interesting about LeGuin's utopian novels and Butler's collapse novels is that people kinda just muddle through. No big heroics. No zombies. Just imperfect people doing their best.
OGSyedIsEverywhere@reddit
The first chapter of Greer's book The Long Descent describes the big picture view of what kinds of hopeful stories are possible in the near future. It's free online and has been separately made into a Youtube audiobook. If nobody here can suggest any better resources, give it a try.